itznonbine
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I'm meant to be doing a report of Privatisation or Nationalised.
I need help between for and against Privatisation.
I need help between for and against Privatisation.
Have you read the numerous threads on this forum on the subject?I'm meant to be doing a report of Privatisation or Nationalised.
I need help between for and against Privatisation.
Probably a good idea to watch out for spelling mistakes as well, even if only GCSE.You have picked a huge subject which is really complex so don't forget to keep it to the level you need as you could easily right a masters or doctorate dissertation on this!
Hmm! Tricky...School. British Rail. GCSE
Avoid Christian Wolmer if you want a balanced view!
hi there.I'm meant to be doing a report of Privatisation or Nationalised.
I need help between for and against Privatisation.
negatives..basically the same as above as it is driven by a requirement to reduce costs/increase profitability for shareholders,rather than the well being of the passenger
It is very bad business to upset your customers.
True for the schlepp to work.Quite true but the 'railway' is isolated from that. Essentially is it a 'Captive Market' No matter how much negative press the railway gets or how many times a train crashes. You will, without a doubt, get that train to work on Monday morning.
True for the schlepp to work.
But not true for the optional traveller.
Hooverboy made this statement:
Take this statement with a pinch of salt! Every successful company which deals directly with the end consumer pays great attention to the consumer's interests. It is very expensive in marketing terms to gain a new customer, whereas the cost of keeping an existing customer is much lower. Word-of-mouth is the best advertising medium.
It is very bad business to upset your customers.
Just remember that spelling and grammar is more important than the content you include - which is what you will primarily be judged on at GCSE level.
True for the schlepp to work.
But not true for the optional traveller.
If GCSE is anything like Scottish Standard Grades / National 5, then your 'report' should look something like this in terms of paragraphing:
Intro - Outline the issue. At your level, it shouldnt be longer than 3 or 4 sentences.
Nationalisation - 2 paragraphs in favour (with a balancing analytical comment towards a downside to each 'pro' at the end of each paragraph)
Privatisation - 2 paragraphs in favour (with a balancing analytical comment towards a downside to each 'pro' at the end of each paragraph)
Conclusion - Your own opinion on which of the two is better
An example of a brief outline of each paragraph should look like this:
Nationalisation
1)
Pro: Profit generated goes straight back into the rail industry
Balance: Money for further investment has to come from the government, which may 'eat up' budgets from other government non railway related projects.
2)
Pro: Nationalisation is normally 'not for profit', so passenger prices needn't be as expensive, as there is less pressure to generate money to sustain the industry
Balance: Not for profit operations require heavy subsidy, so industrial austerity measures may be required, which would render the 'pro' counter productive
Then follow the same structure for the two 'Privatisation' paragraphs, and you're all set.
Just remember that spelling and grammar is more important than the content you include - which is what you will primarily be judged on at GCSE level.
Good luck
Of course cynically as I get older, I'm of the view that virtually everyone has an agenda and biased opinion and to actually find an unbiased opinion and the truth for that matter is extremely difficult.
When you are younger things tend to be more Black and White as you get older it becomes more Grey.