Hello,
I've received a Notice of intention to prosecute letter from Govia Thameslink and I could really do with some advice please!
I believe that I received the Notice letter because I had been issued penalty fines on two prior occasions. I'm very ashamed to say that prior to being caught on 11 June I had a habit of purchasing outbound-only tickets from Arlesey to Farringdon. Not as an excuse but for context as to why I did this, Arlesey doesn't have a ticket barrier and in Farringdon I switch onto the tube for the rest of my journey. I noticed that I'd get my outbound tickets inspected and never my return tickets, and having just returned from parental leave money is tight. Since 11 June I have been purchasing the correct return tickets, but I have counted 25 times in my Trainline app where I purchased the outbound-only tickets.
On 11 June I did have a valid outbound ticket, but it was for the following train at 09:03 and not the 08:35 that I caught (there is no price difference between the two). I was in a hurry to make the train and payment for the ticket failed at the same time that I boarded the train as my station has very little mobile reception. I know this is my fault. I immediately refreshed the Trainline app but I could no longer choose to pay for the 08:35 as it had departed. It took 3 minutes to complete the payment with bad reception. Half an hour later a ticket inspector checked my ticket. I politely explained that I originally tried to pay for the 08:35 and showed him the timestamp of payment at 08:38. The ticket inspector did agree that my ticket was technically valid, but still took my details. I presume he then saw my name on the system, hence being issued with this letter.
I've attached the redacted letter that I received, but the details of offence are: "That you on 11 June 2024, Did enter a train for the purpose of travelling on the railway, and upon inspection at Farringdon <lu> (ZFD); did not produce a valid ticket entitling travel."
I have read a number of cases on this forum which were very helpful with drafting a response letter, thank you. I want to include a mention of the fact that I had purchased a ticket, whilst fully accepting that I was still in the wrong. Given that I failed to pay for 25 return tickets I do not want to incriminate myself so have not mentioned this, though I am fully aware that they may discover these nonetheless and am preparing myself to pay a hefty fine should they audit my Trainline account. It goes without saying that I've learned my lesson and I would be very grateful for any advice you may have regarding my response letter.
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Dear GTR,
Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to respond to your letter dated 26th July 2024, Reference number: XX
I would like to sincerely apologise for travelling with a ticket that was not valid for my journey. In my hurry to make the train, I realised that my payment for the 08:35 had failed once I boarded the train. I immediately attempted to make payment again but was unsuccessful due to the train having departed. I therefore paid for the following train (09:03) with a timestamp 08:38 (ticket reference TTXXX). As you are aware, further down the journey an Inspection Officer rightly informed me that the ticket was not valid.
I accept that it is entirely my fault that I had not ensured that payment had been taken prior to stepping on to the train. It is my responsibility as a passenger of the railway services to ensure I always hold a valid ticket prior to travelling. I am very apologetic for taking advantage of the railway service and I am extremely regretful for my lapse in judgement.
I am committed to ensuring that I hold a valid ticket before travelling and now that I have discovered the Flexi Season Ticket option I will be purchasing these for my travel after the Summer holidays.
It would be extremely appreciated if your company would be willing to settle this matter out of court and I am very willing to pay the outstanding fare in addition to your administrative costs in dealing with this matter.
Sincerely,
I've received a Notice of intention to prosecute letter from Govia Thameslink and I could really do with some advice please!
I believe that I received the Notice letter because I had been issued penalty fines on two prior occasions. I'm very ashamed to say that prior to being caught on 11 June I had a habit of purchasing outbound-only tickets from Arlesey to Farringdon. Not as an excuse but for context as to why I did this, Arlesey doesn't have a ticket barrier and in Farringdon I switch onto the tube for the rest of my journey. I noticed that I'd get my outbound tickets inspected and never my return tickets, and having just returned from parental leave money is tight. Since 11 June I have been purchasing the correct return tickets, but I have counted 25 times in my Trainline app where I purchased the outbound-only tickets.
On 11 June I did have a valid outbound ticket, but it was for the following train at 09:03 and not the 08:35 that I caught (there is no price difference between the two). I was in a hurry to make the train and payment for the ticket failed at the same time that I boarded the train as my station has very little mobile reception. I know this is my fault. I immediately refreshed the Trainline app but I could no longer choose to pay for the 08:35 as it had departed. It took 3 minutes to complete the payment with bad reception. Half an hour later a ticket inspector checked my ticket. I politely explained that I originally tried to pay for the 08:35 and showed him the timestamp of payment at 08:38. The ticket inspector did agree that my ticket was technically valid, but still took my details. I presume he then saw my name on the system, hence being issued with this letter.
I've attached the redacted letter that I received, but the details of offence are: "That you on 11 June 2024, Did enter a train for the purpose of travelling on the railway, and upon inspection at Farringdon <lu> (ZFD); did not produce a valid ticket entitling travel."
I have read a number of cases on this forum which were very helpful with drafting a response letter, thank you. I want to include a mention of the fact that I had purchased a ticket, whilst fully accepting that I was still in the wrong. Given that I failed to pay for 25 return tickets I do not want to incriminate myself so have not mentioned this, though I am fully aware that they may discover these nonetheless and am preparing myself to pay a hefty fine should they audit my Trainline account. It goes without saying that I've learned my lesson and I would be very grateful for any advice you may have regarding my response letter.
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Dear GTR,
Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to respond to your letter dated 26th July 2024, Reference number: XX
I would like to sincerely apologise for travelling with a ticket that was not valid for my journey. In my hurry to make the train, I realised that my payment for the 08:35 had failed once I boarded the train. I immediately attempted to make payment again but was unsuccessful due to the train having departed. I therefore paid for the following train (09:03) with a timestamp 08:38 (ticket reference TTXXX). As you are aware, further down the journey an Inspection Officer rightly informed me that the ticket was not valid.
I accept that it is entirely my fault that I had not ensured that payment had been taken prior to stepping on to the train. It is my responsibility as a passenger of the railway services to ensure I always hold a valid ticket prior to travelling. I am very apologetic for taking advantage of the railway service and I am extremely regretful for my lapse in judgement.
I am committed to ensuring that I hold a valid ticket before travelling and now that I have discovered the Flexi Season Ticket option I will be purchasing these for my travel after the Summer holidays.
It would be extremely appreciated if your company would be willing to settle this matter out of court and I am very willing to pay the outstanding fare in addition to your administrative costs in dealing with this matter.
Sincerely,