This is the drafted reply as correspondence to SWR . Members kindly suggest any changes or modification. Your cooperation is highly appreciated.
Dear SWR Prosecutions Department,
I am writing regarding the penalty notice (Ref: SWREMG________), received on 13 May 2025, relating to my journey from Egham to London Waterloo on 9 May 2025.
On the day of travel, I purchased a discounted ticket from the staffed counter at Egham station. I showed my valid 16–25 Railcard on my phone, which the staff member verified before issuing me the discounted fare. Unfortunately, upon arrival at Waterloo, my phone had run out of battery, so I was unable to present the Railcard at the time of exit.
I explained the situation and offered my 18+ Student Oyster card, which has my 16–25 Railcard linked to it, as an alternative means of verification. However, this was not accepted, and the officer informed me that a report would be submitted and that SWR would contact me in writing.
I am extremely sorry that I was unable to present my Railcard due to these unforeseen circumstances, and I will ensure I carry a power bank with me in the future. I wish to clarify that I was fully eligible to travel on the discounted fare, and I had no intention of fare evasion. This was an isolated and genuine mistake caused by my phone battery dying, and I sincerely regret any inconvenience caused. It will not happen again.
I believe that the Railcard Terms & Conditions allow me to use the 'forgotten Railcard policy' in this case. I would be grateful if you could confirm that I do not need to make any additional payment and that the matter will not be pursued in court.
For your reference, I have attached a copy of my valid 16–25 Railcard and the ticket purchase receipt for verification.
In light of the above, I respectfully request that you reconsider the penalty. I would be very grateful for your understanding.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
I would be specifically quoting the relevant T&C para as
@jfollows quoted above. I would not get into the business about showing another type of card as it confuses things a bit.
Can you also include the actual ticket you had (or only the receipt if the ticket got taken by gates / staff)? if you have it then I would include it (but keep a copy for your own records)
So your reply might look like below - includes some minor additions that hopefully you can spot:
do see what others think before you send this off as there might be better suggestions!
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Dear SWR Prosecutions Department,
I am writing regarding the penalty notice (Ref: SWREMG________), received on 13 May 2025, relating to my journey from Egham to London Waterloo on 9 May 2025.
On the day of travel, I purchased a discounted ticket from the staffed counter at Egham station. I showed my valid 16–25 Railcard on my phone, which the staff member verified before issuing me the discounted fare. Unfortunately, upon arrival at Waterloo, my phone had run out of battery, so I was unable to present the Railcard at the time of exit.
I explained the situation and offered my 18+ Student Oyster card, which has my 16–25 Railcard linked to it, as an alternative means of verification. However, this was not accepted, and the officer informed me that a report would be submitted and that SWR would contact me in writing.
I am extremely sorry that I was unable to present my Railcard due to these unforeseen circumstances, and I will ensure I carry a power bank with me in the future. I wish to clarify that I was fully eligible to travel on the discounted fare, and I had no intention of fare evasion. This was an isolated and genuine mistake caused by my phone battery dying, and I sincerely regret any inconvenience caused. It will not happen again.
I believe that the Railcard Terms & Conditions indicate that the 'forgotten Railcard policy' would apply in this case. As detailed in the National Rail Conditions of Travel Part C, Section 8 (parts 8.5 - 8.7) including "
However, if you were unable to present the Railcard because you had forgotten to carry it on that particular journey or mislaid it, the Train Company concerned will refund any fare or Penalty Fare paid in accordance with Condition 10." and as also explained in the FAQs section of the Railcard website.
I would be grateful if you could confirm that I do not need to make any additional payment as detailed in your letter and that the matter will not be pursued in court.
For your reference, I have attached a copy of my valid 16–25 Railcard and the ticket purchase receipt for verification.
In light of the above, I respectfully request that you reconsider the request for payment and any penalty. I would be very grateful for your understanding.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,