so you believe the below letter to be satisfactory:
"Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in response to the Notice of Intention to Prosecute dated 13/08/24 I wish to explain the circumstances of the incident on 08/08/24 and respectfully request your consideration of my case.
On the day in question, I was on my way home from work and foolishly purchased a child's ticket.
I am deeply sorry for what has happened. I understand the importance of having a valid ticket for the entire journey, and I sincerely regret this decision.
This incident has taught me the importance of ensuring that I have the correct ticket before traveling. I assure you that I have learned from this experience and will be sure to never do this in the future.
I would be grateful to settle this matter without the need for court action. I am willing to pay the outstanding fare for the journey as well as any administrative costs incurred by the train company in dealing with this matter.
Yours sincerely,"
thanks in advance
or shall i add - On the day in question, I was on my way home from work and foolishly purchased a child's ticket on my Southeastern journey?
"Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in response to the Notice of Intention to Prosecute dated 13/08/24 I wish to explain the circumstances of the incident on 08/08/24 and respectfully request your consideration of my case.
On the day in question, I was on my way home from work and foolishly purchased a child's ticket.
I am deeply sorry for what has happened. I understand the importance of having a valid ticket for the entire journey, and I sincerely regret this decision.
This incident has taught me the importance of ensuring that I have the correct ticket before traveling. I assure you that I have learned from this experience and will be sure to never do this in the future.
I would be grateful to settle this matter without the need for court action. I am willing to pay the outstanding fare for the journey as well as any administrative costs incurred by the train company in dealing with this matter.
Yours sincerely,"
thanks in advance
or shall i add - On the day in question, I was on my way home from work and foolishly purchased a child's ticket on my Southeastern journey?
sorry what do you mean by the letter looks better but wont make any difference??Letter looks much better but it won't make any difference: You state that you were on your way home from work. Do you (really) live near Waterloo East and work in Plumstead?