You need to distance yourself from the army as far as describing your experience to date.. Great that you have discipline, get up on time and are presentable but I'd aim more towards your customer service, dealing with public, sticking to rules and regulations and knowing the importance of safety.. It sounds like you are trying to sell a soldier to the railway, you are however looking for a career within the railway where you can use some of your skills to give the best service you can..
Ex forces & now train driver
Ex forces & now train driver

Is their any people on this forum that can help me out with trying to turn all my Army jargon into civilian talk and relate it to being a train driver?
I thought i managed to do it this time with the ongoing Freightliner opening but i seem to have (for now) failed again. i am aware this is a gold dust job and there are hundreds of people going for the jobs available.
I seem to get stuck with the applications where they ask for past experience of... I try to say stuff like (the truth) i am a vehicle commander so working in a pressured environment trying to keep timing with other vehicles is essential so being in charge of a train seems very similar. I even compared train company's to Army regiments, all working together for the same goal with their own company targets. Its true, they do sound like regiments. haha.
I am even looking to shift my career for now to HGV to get experience of delivering goods on time in all conditions, in charge of my lorry etc again to be similar to a freight train driver.
This is my 5th attempt now and starting to be a little disillusioned over this dream i have.
I can even send a CV for if anybody on here is HR to look over and give pointers though i know most jobs are fill in forms and in Freightliners case a 10 question test!!
ANY help at all illl be hugely grateful.
Aaron.