And so it begins.....
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Yes, how does CCTV "improve your comfort..." !?
Ironically, one of the worst offenders is GWR, whose 'blue period' previous incarnation of FGW claimed to have had an information purge, involving the removal of unnecessary messages and content! It isn't just broadcast items, either - my local station (Betchworth) has signs that read "For your comfort and convenience, this is a no-smoking station" (or similar ghastly wording), which carries an implication that some other stations may permit smoking, but is also not a firm and forceful instruction in the way that the simple "No Smoking" is.
There is an obsession on the Railway with sounding 'professional' at the expense of being direct, honest and clear.
Case in point: GTR's PIS has started saying "customers are requested to mind the gap between the train and platform edge when boarding."
The majority of the sentence is unnecessary, and it's in the third person, which makes it sound like waffle rather than a call to action.
Change it to the second person, and cut off the front and back. "Please mind the gap between the train and the platform." Shorter, clearer to people who may have trouble understanding English, more direct, less waffle.
The FGW / GWR 165 / 166 play the "Please do not attempt to board or alight from the train when the doors are closing." at every stop. It is a pointless announcement when most people who would board the train when the doors are closing will be on the platform and unable to hear the announcement.
At Paddington, there is a ridiculous pre-recorded announcement. "This is a security announcement reminding passengers to keep their belongings with them...", etc. I wince every time I hear it.
What annoys me is the announcements at Euston, that certain tickets are not valid 'in' certain trains. Surely it should be 'on'?
I think the thing that annoys me most is the way they're made. The non-train related announcement at Huddersfield (ie, please keep off the tracks, keep your belongings with you etc) have been voiced by a lady with a local accent, but each sentence sounds like 5 or 6 sentences... '...unattended baggage. may be removed. or destroyed. by the security services'
Jeremy Clarkson once admitted that he speaks the way he does because his heavy smoking habit has left him too short of breath to say long sentences in one go. I can only guess that maybe this lady is the same but it's dead annoying.
At least in your part of the GWR empire you are spared...
"Weatherbury, Weydon Priors and Shottsford are request stops, and passengers for these stations, should ask the conductor, on the train, to arrange for the train to stop, to allow them to leave." (PS, not sure about the grammatical correctness of that, either.)
I suspect it's intended to get into your consciousness so that you don't try to hurl yourself on or off at the last second at some other stop. Whether it works or not is another matter.
At Paddington, there is a ridiculous pre-recorded announcement. "This is a security announcement reminding passengers to keep their belongings with them...", etc. I wince every time I hear it.
We must have a first class railway if this is what people are getting so bothered about.
A bit of a pedantic thread quite frankly. What does it matter. Would you rather not have this than a coach full of stinking drunks?
Flapping at the gate. Typing whilst a passenger on a vehicle that is bouncing around a lot.
And even if the service is not stopping at a station, it is still geographically the next station. I will tell people where we are at work to keep them informed as to what is going on. Going to Tooting, I will often use Collier's Wood station as a landmark. There is no expectation that anyone would be getting in/off there, even if we do stop right outside it.
Yes, totally different circumstances. However someone may think that a station is being named as a landmark rather than a calling point.
What annoys me is the announcements at Euston, that certain tickets are not valid 'in' certain trains. Surely it should be 'on'?
That's a curious one. Traditionally, you talk of being 'on' a train or a bus, but that seems a very odd quirk of English. 'on' normally carries connotations of being above, whereas 'in' would logically make more sense when you are clearly located inside the train (rather than being on the roof of the carriage ). Indeed, for cars, you do say 'in', not 'on'.
I do wonder why we have this odd usage of 'on' for trains. I wonder whether it has something to do with some of the earliest train 'carriages' in the early days of the railways being more like open wagons with seats on them - for which saying 'on' would therefore make more sense?
Another expression that grates (sorry) - how else could something be recorded and broadcast if not recorded beforehand? This sits alongside pre-booked, pre-ordered and so on. Recorded, booked and ordered.
Yeah, who cares? Wha'evuh.
Fair point. Accepted.
Wo'evva, shorely?
- marketing-speak pervades!
'impact' is almost universally used instead of 'affect' these days.
I thought the 'principal stations' announcement on ATW omits request stops.
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Not totally relevant, but the TPE announcements at Huddersfield are currently being 'extremely sorry for the severe delay' for trains just 5 mins late. I guess the files have got mixed up...
'impact' is almost universally used instead of 'affect' these days.
"Mind the gap" is really all that is needed.
1. "Welcome aboard this Great Western Railway service to Great Malvern. The next stop is Filton Abbey Wood. Please keep your personal belongings with you at all times and report anything suspicious to a member of staff."
2. "Welcome aboard this Great Western Railway service to Great Malvern. The next stop is Bristol Parkway. Please do not attempt to board or leave the train when the doors are closing."
4. "Welcome aboard this Great Western Railway service to Great Malvern. The next stop is Cam and Dursley. Please ensure you are familiar with the safety information displayed throughout the train.