I would agree that that is a simple and straightforward next step.I think this is the approach to take, as it concentrates on the key reason why Merseyrail is not entitled to prosecute.
I would agree that that is a simple and straightforward next step.I think this is the approach to take, as it concentrates on the key reason why Merseyrail is not entitled to prosecute.
This is good for clarity of the likely person reading it. Who seems to not to be familiar with the basic ticketing rules.I would be inclined to write something as simple as:-
Thank you for your latest email. In the event that you choose to prosecute, I shall rely on the NRCoT for my defence, in particular paragraph 9.5.2, which is clear that the appropriate action to have taken would be to have issued me an excess fare for travelling on a different route to that specified for my “via Runcorn” ticket. I remain willing to pay the appropriate excess to resolve the matter.
Mersey rail have not confirmed the legislation creating the offence they accuse the OP of committing. It is a matter of pure speculation whether Merseyrail regards an offence as having been committed under its Byelaw 18, or under Section 5 Regulation of Railways Act 1889, or under some other legislation altogether. Each of these is different, and consequently knowledge of which legislation is in play is an essential prerequisite to any assessment of whether the necessary ingredients of an offence can be established. That is why the failure to identify the legislation creating the offence alleged is so serious a breach of Part 7.3(1) Criminal Procedure Rules 2020, why I cannot see any rational basis on which the OP can at present enter any plea other than one of 'not guilty', and why she cannot have a fair trial if that breach is allowed to stand.Have Merseyrail confirmed which law they are even prosecuting under?
I am sorry to have to say that Merseyrail's conduct of the Sarah Hodgson case (https://www.railforums.co.uk/threads/merseyrail-prosecution.229114/) strongly suggests that the company will not be deflected from prosecution of the OP, as it appears to remain wedded to the specious belief that failure to produce a ticket its officials regard as valid entitles it, without more, to prosecute. It does no harm for the OP to persist in her attempts to have the case reviewed on the basis that she produced a ticket for her journey that was conditionally valid subject to payment of an excess which she has, I hope, now paid. I fear, however, that those attempts will fail, and that she will continue to have deal with prosecution of a charge against her the nature of which remains obscure.
She can, and it seems "must", tell the court about the problem "at once".I fear, however, that those attempts will fail, and that she will continue to have deal with prosecution of a charge against her the nature of which remains obscure.
And can inform other relevant people.It seems to me reasonable to interpret 1.2 as meaning the defendant has a duty to tell the court of relevant failures by the prosecution.
..............Given the timescale, if a simple summary is put at the start (or the summary used as a short letter with the detail in an appendix) it could be cc'd to the head of prosecutions, the head of Merseyrail, the Mayor, and maybe a selection of organisations interested in for example consumer matters, news, and/or railway oversight.
I think it's more effective to directly request or suggest that they engage with the point or points made.In the event that you choose to prosecute, I shall rely on the NRCoT for my defence
They have already raised that point, to no avail. But I am agnostic as to how a second attempt at highlighting its relevance is made.She can, and it seems "must", tell the court about the problem "at once".
And can inform other relevant people.
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I think it's more effective to directly request or suggest that they engage with the point or points made.
They should realise that it could look worse in court if they failed to do so.
The ticket from Chester to Liverpool Lime Street that was produced is valid via Runcorn only and via any Merseyrail train.”
This is the sentence that doesn't make sense to me. ERGO, I produced a valid ticket.
The ticket from Chester to Liverpool Lime Street that was produced is valid via Runcorn only and via any Merseyrail train.”
I am not sure if this is the issue, but I think we have to assume that there is a typo in what Merseyrail sent out and it should readThis is the sentence that doesn't make sense to me. ERGO, I produced a valid ticket.
The ticket from Chester to Liverpool Lime Street that was produced is valid via Runcorn only and NOT via any Merseyrail train.”
We can see from our system when requested to provide our team with a valid ticket or pass for your journey, you were unable to do so. As you produced both a trainline collection code that is not a valid ticket for a journey on our network until it has been printed.
Thanks - that's important clarity and I agree this is an acknowledgement this was produced on the train. Good stuff.I did produce it on the train. I showed it to the first inspector. Which I understand them to be acknowledging in this sentence, even though it's been abandonned halfway through:
is it worth adding at the end 'this is why I believe the prosecution should be withdrawn' or some such wording? (experts who have commented in detail on this thread ought to say if this is appropriate to add to the draft I think)Thank you as ever for all of your responses. I am just going to work but have drafted the following response:
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Please could I draw your attention to the content of my letter, which states that under National Rail Condition of Travel 9.5, the only proper course of action for the ticket via Runcorn is to charge an excess fare.
Where you: 9.5.2 are using a route for which your Ticket is not valid; ... you will be charged the difference between the fare that you have paid and the lowest price Ticket that is valid for the train you are using.
Additionally, the Strategic Rail Authority Penalty Fares Policy document available on penaltyservices.co.uk refers to the ticket I produced:
• Ticket routing. A passenger who has a ticket for the journey they are making, but who is using a route on which their ticket is not valid, may not be charged a penalty fare. The National Rail Conditions of Carriage allow the passenger to pay an excess fare to travel on a different route from that shown on their ticket.
I was therefore incorrectly issued the penalty fare where an excess fare was applicable. To cover the excess fare for travelling on a different route to that specified for my ticket via Runcorn , I have provided the postal order.
I think this is ok to send but you might want to mention that Merseyrail is listed in Appendix A of the National Rail Conditions of Travel as a Train Company to which the conditions apply. Merseyrail sometimes like to claim the NRCoT doesn't apply to them.Thank you as ever for all of your responses. I am just going to work but have drafted the following response:
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Please could I draw your attention to the content of my letter, which states that under National Rail Condition of Travel 9.5, the only proper course of action for the ticket via Runcorn is to charge an excess fare.
Where you: 9.5.2 are using a route for which your Ticket is not valid; ... you will be charged the difference between the fare that you have paid and the lowest price Ticket that is valid for the train you are using.
Additionally, the Strategic Rail Authority Penalty Fares Policy document available on penaltyservices.co.uk refers to the ticket I produced:
• Ticket routing. A passenger who has a ticket for the journey they are making, but who is using a route on which their ticket is not valid, may not be charged a penalty fare. The National Rail Conditions of Carriage allow the passenger to pay an excess fare to travel on a different route from that shown on their ticket.
I was therefore incorrectly issued the penalty fare where an excess fare was applicable. To cover the excess fare for travelling on a different route to that specified for my ticket via Runcorn , I have provided the postal order.
Yes.This is where you can escalate from the top down. You can express the problem very succinctly now in terms that are easy for anyone to understand, so you write to the top of the organisation showing it is obvious to anyone that the organisation is doing something blatantly stupid and ask for it to be addressed. You are able to pull in others at this point too, such as Merseyrail's supervising authority, Transport Focus, your MP, the DfT, the press etc.
You need a one or two paragraph summary followed by the minimum necessary supporting evidence with an offer to provide the complete evidence on request.
Agreed.there's still the possibility they might attempt to find a way to substitute 18(1) ....So I do think there's merit in focussing on the substantive issue here (the contractual liability to pay the excess) as that would eliminate all proceedings.
I did that. The third response was ostensibly from someone else but from the same generic email address and signed by the same person as the other twoI would reply to Merseyrail asking that they escalate your correspondence to a Manager.
I would also return the form by post.
Their militant and bloody minded attitude is typical of the organisation and is what gives Liverpool a bad name. And yes I'm from Liverpool and live here!