I'm findng it hard to see where some of this conversation is going, and I have nothing to say about which parts of the USA fall within which regions, or how dense concrete is, or how a gravitational energy storage asssebly on rails would negotiate points.
But I will make these two points:
1. Water pumping.
The operational and effective energy storage systems in the UK operate over a height differential of only about 200 metres. That is not difficult to achieve on the west coast of the USA (however it is defined) or in thousands of other locations. The requirement for a water suppy is only in respect of replenishing losses (leakage, evaporation, etc); essentially it recycles the same volume of fluid up and down the same 'pipe'. The 'reservoirs' need not all be exposed to sunlight. Many alternative are available: where geological strata provides underground capacity - former oil wells provide potential for reserves underground; even a simple web of dark pvc membranes over the 2 or 3 square kilometers for a deep reserve will make a big difference to evaporation
2. Rail mounted rigid gravitational storage.
There is no reason to presume that this use of a rail-wheel interface (efficient as it is) need have any compatibility with existing passenger and freight transport systems. The electrical connections to the moving masses could be quite specific to the task in hand. e.g. full delta three-phase connections could be made via a novel triple-contact conductor, mounted on the ground between the rails, or alongside the powered vehicle. (I assume the entire site is fenced off against intruding people and wildlife, as are most power facilities).
But what strikes me as most eccentric about this proposal is the use of the smooth wheel-rail interface (which works so well for general purpose railways with all the clever geometry for turning corners). Surely this dedicated purpose track would achive far greater efficiencies with toothed rail and cog-wheels. No slippage and a near-perfect transfer between movement and energy.
All of these schemes do require a high level of maintenance and ultimately, it is the running costs of energy systems that are as crucial as the cost of consumable fuels in determining viability.